I only received feedback from one person on my last elevator pitch so I did not have much to go off of. The feedback said that I was entertaining the entire time but that I just needed to project more confidence into my pitch. She also recommended that I adjust the camera angles so that I can show the use of my hands more when presenting. The feedback helped me make adjustments for this pitch in way that I projected myself more towards the screen and used my hands when I was talking to give sort of a visual representation. After completing the elevator pitch for a third time I feel way more confident and comfortable in front of the camera. I feel like I have shortened my pitch to really focus on what I am offering customers so that they get the main gist in the matter of a minute. I hope you all enjoy.
You did a great job! I have no critiques. I watched your last elevator pitch and you did great improving your confidence and motions. I saw much more power through this video. Good job!
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ReplyDeleteI loved watching your elevator pitch! The only thing I would say is adjust the audio because you sound a little far away but that's just the computers fault. Overall you did an amazing job explaining your idea and explaining it on video. I can definitely see the growth in confidence. Great work!